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Time
a confusing thing
no madder what we do it seems to sting
Not knowing where it is till it is gone
then we sit there at dawn
with it being foregone
It seems were a pawn
in time and space
once we die....there is not a trace
We chase after time trying to get it back
but it all seems to be one useless hack
©2008-2009 ~Hopless-love-poet
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Author's Comments

I might not be the best but...I just felt like writing it....
So leave a comment if you like it...if not...then oh well..and thanks for taking time to read this
XD

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^.^ I like it! You're good!

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Christian and Proud! ^^

"The wise man does not ask God to deliver him from the storm, but to deliver him from fear."
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Thank you Meg. but I am not good....
I hate everything I work on
>.<
But thanks for the compliment!

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Only in death does our life truly start...
:iconthat-is-my-bell:
You're much better than I am. I think it's very good. Don't hate it.

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Christian and Proud! ^^

"The wise man does not ask God to deliver him from the storm, but to deliver him from fear."
:iconhopless-love-poet:
Thats not true...
All of yours have deep meaning...by what I have seen.
All of mine are like 9-15 liners they don't contain much
and I hate everything I do because I know I can do better so I always hate what I do so I can get better.
But don't say I am better then you because that is a lie.

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Only in death does our life truly start...
:iconthat-is-my-bell:
okay

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Christian and Proud! ^^

"The wise man does not ask God to deliver him from the storm, but to deliver him from fear."
:iconhopless-love-poet:
YAY!!!
My message got across...for once =)
lolz

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Only in death does our life truly start...
:iconthat-is-my-bell:
^>^ lol

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Christian and Proud! ^^

"The wise man does not ask God to deliver him from the storm, but to deliver him from fear."
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It's good, but kinda depressing. Still good. I just wish I hadn't read it until I was over what happened with Waya...

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Nankurunaisa.

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